independent poem-4, Hoshi
Happily Never after
The Naga Cinderella did not have a happily ever after
Her mother died when she was six, then came stepmother
Stepmother was cruel, she made Cinderella carry water
And oh! Her little back hurt, the well was so far away
She had to carry firewood from the deep forest
While her little sister gossiped with other women
Then came the festival, and busy was the stepmother
The old lady got the best necklaces and shawls
She packed her daughters basket with wine and meat
And early in the morning, she gently shook her awake.
All the while Cinderella had to clean the chicken coop
Feed the pigs and all she got was very dirty
When the sun rose in the east, her heart sank
She was very late; all the young people had set out
But Cinderella did not despair, she got her little zhie
Dusted her mekhala and slung her basket on her head
She would at least get firewood, if not wild vegetables
Even if she did not win, she would spared of the shame
So she tried to get the straightest wood, to fill her basket
But everything had been collected, so she sat down and cried
Then a passing young man asked her ‘why are you crying? Are
you in pain?’
‘I’m not pain, but I fear I will be shamed if I return empty-handed’
she said
Hearing this, the pale young man instructed Cinderella not
to look up
But she was a curious girl, so when asked not to she did
The sight before her was terrifying, a giant white snake leaping
From Branch to branch, swiftly filling her basket with fire
wood
scared she pretended not see, until the young man told
her to look
but before parting he said, ‘I will come to take you away
tonight’
The horns sounded the end of festival; all she could do was
return
Her basket filled with bounties, firewood beautifully
arranged
That night Cinderella was the clear winner, it was a joyous occasion
But she feared sleep, begging her friends for help
So they put a big log against the door, scattered salt in the
holes of the hut
Cinderella was made to lie in the middle, and one by one
All twenty of her friends lay on top of her, so the serpent
may be deceived
At midnight he came knocking ‘Cinderella I have come for you’
The log was moved without a sound, and one by one the
friends were lifted
Each time he muttered, ‘not this one, not this one either’
All the while, poor Cinderella held her breadth, hoping her
would leave
He left; with her in his arms, and no one head her cries as
they fell in deep slumber
Thus she lived happily never after
1.Mekhala: a wrap around worn by Naga women,
each tribe has a specific name for this garment;
but mekhala is one common way to address it .
each tribe has a specific name for this garment;
but mekhala is one common way to address it .
2.Zhie: Naga flat-blade machete. it come in all sizes.
This is an interesting work. The title of the poem itself breaks the conventional romanticised fairy tale. I also like the use of folk elements in it. It brings out cultural identity in the tale as a poem.
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