Independent poem -1
Sometimes they say I'm way too expressive,
Sometimes they say I'm expressive in passive,
Sometimes they say I laugh too loud,
Sometimes they don't even bother for my silent sobbing cloud,
\Sometimes they tell me to be more in limitedness,
Sometimes they tell me to be in limitless,
Sometimes they remember to tell me the importance of marriage,
Sometimes they forget to tell me the expectation of its carriage,
Sometimes they hate the idea of love,
Sometimes they love the idea of hate,
Sometimes they want to bring the inner me,
Sometimes they don't let me be,
Sometimes they comment on what I wear,
Sometimes they like the way they tear;
They like the way they tear the independent things,
I am you, You is We,
And These sometimes are the blockages of the dependent norms of
the collective thinking which is struggling to be independent.
The ideas put in these lines which actually emphasize on the society's conventional expectations from you which creates a burden, in turn, has been well put by you.
ReplyDeleteI am really thankful for your wonderful analysis of the poem :)
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